islame_COEM wrote: expozIslam wrote:
islame_COEM wrote:Any thoughts or comments on the videos /or how I could improve them?
I am a bit sleepy but let me try to write how I felt. First video is able to hold interest but 2nd and 3rd video have overlapping content and audio is a monotone. It gets boring after a while. If you could play the role of Allah and Mo and reveal the verses
, that will be great. Overall, I liked the information that you have put together and appreciate your efforts. Can you also add the text of verses to the video please?
Thanks for your input. I could happily play the role of Mohammed, but can you imagine the uproar given the noise that was made over the Danish cartoons?
The problem I have is that I would like to engage Muslims without causing offence.
The moment you criticize islam, muslims will feel offended.
The hadith video was separate to this sequence. I would like new questioners who are looking at the religion in depth, with the few sources that are available to make further headway than I did at the beginning.
I understand your reasons but I still feel that audio needs a bit of dramatization. How one can do that? I am not sure. I am not good at doing this myself so I cannot even think of how you could.
The audience was not intended to be for ex-Muslims, who probably will know most of these facts already
Knowing the facts does make a difference. I am not sure if I would have reacted differently if I did not know these details. Most likely, I would have.
There are many videos that poke fun at Islam, and focus on a parochial aspect of it. I saw no sense in adding to an already over-subscribed area and wanted to engage an entirely different group of people, and give them a headstart with all the main quotes already farmed & cultivated for them.
So in essense I find I was grappling with engaging interest, yet keeping factual & objective content.
I think if you have slightly lesser content variation per video, then the audience might get a better understanding. The listener should not suffer from information overload.
Not sure if I managed to do it, but if there are other ways of doing this then please let me know your suggestions.
I am artistically challenged :redface: . I am not able to think right now on what you could do to make the videos more engaging but i will keep it in mind and if i get anything, I will let you know.
Regarding the text of the videos and the verses if you go to my channel (in my signature) you will see the link there
Yep. Had a look at your letter. I like it very much and will be using your letter for the emails that I send out to addresses that I collect.